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Countless of opportunities in China
(Assignment A1)
The opportunities of exporting to China are all possible for companies which expect to realize profit. This country is a very big economic power, and it will just appear in the future. The Chinese people have gone through an evolution of poverty, ignorance and bad infrastructure.
The exciting China
China is a country which growth extremely fast, the incomes for the consumers are growing immense and the middleclass are over 100 millions consumers on the labour market. Today demands the Chinese people western goods.
That is also why many Danish companies export to China; they demand the goods and the manpower are very cheap. The companies may remember the country’s infrastructure, because the difference between city and village are huge – it will be very difficult to distribute the goods from village to the rest of the world. One positive thing is that China has shifted from a central plan economy to a market economy. It means that the 1,3 billion of the population in the future will increase with 7-8% in the private consumption.
Growth possibilities
The growth possibilities are great, and Dr. Wang she is a person who helps new entrepreneurs to integrate a company. She has a great influence on the economic growth, and she is known from the private sector, also from policy.
After Dr. Wang’s revolution on the labour market then have the country opened new possibilities for all with the export.
The culture
A company which appear exporting to China may be very careful, because there are some cultural characteristic in the human. When a Chinese says “Yes” it means they agree you or they understood what you said. It is also very important that they not will “loose there face” – then do not make it public for the persons.
When you negotiate must you have a lot of patience and be steady in your reactions. It is also very normal with a lot of interruptions in the solutions – they are discussing forward and backward with the overhead.
If you invite a Chinese business partner for dinner then you may remember; they are eaten and refill the plate as long like you. Under the dinner it is very normal that the host gives the visitor delicious food over on the plate. As host do not put the fingers in your mouth, it is very nasty for the Chinese people.
Everything from this article is basically know how before you are starting to think exporting to China.
Verner Worms is also talking about 10 golden advices to the business man who will have behaviour on the Chinese labour market.
The advices can be seemed here:
1. Patience – things take time, especially in the start.
2. Do not rush up – it would be expected like no control.
3. Do not give up - everything is in the principle possible in a relation-based society.
4. Be flexible – keep up your own limits.
5. Be aware - learn to march to the local music.
6. Be social with the Chinese people – you are not learning much from a hotel window.
7. Build trust to your business partner – it is more important than you believe.
8. Do not offend the Chinese people – They are sensitive of criticism.
9. Have focus on the positive aspects of the Chinese people you socialize - "If you like me, I like you"
10. The Chinese people are not opaque - They are just reacting different.
Written by
Ivan Iversen
Bestseller assistant
OT: Engelsk - LUCKY $
This article must not be published before of 16. February 2011
Bestseller opens flagship store on Shanghai’s streets
25. January 2011 (Assignment B1)
In front of 3 weeks will Bestseller launch a new flagship store in China. The Danish concern has bought locals in one of Shanghai’s most popular streets to show the innovative clothes from brands like; Jack & Jones, Vero Moda, Only and Pieces.
Bestseller has global more than 4200 shops in 41 countries, but the opening of the flagship store the 16. February on Shanghai’s popular street will be an evolution for the trendy clothes.
“Troels Holch Povlsen” pronounces; we are proud to be presented on the Chinese labour market, it is here there future will become reality. We believe that China is a very potential market, which is why we are very interested and now establish our company here.
This day we are launching our new store would we have a special event for the big day. This day it is possible to see new collections, take part in competitions, and if you have questions then ask our communications manager for further answer.
Written by
Bo Terp
Contact for further information on:
[email protected]
Source statement: www.bestseller.com/press/Documents/Bestseller%20sign.jpg
billig måde at få rettet 30 fejl på imo.
@Mrcharming
Yep har du ret i, men der er utallige åbenlyse fejl for personen der bare forstår lidt engelsk :)
ountless of opportunities in China
(Assignment A1)
The opportunities of exporting to China are all possible for companies which expect to realize(Gain - hvis der menes opnå) profit. This country is a very big economic power, and it will just appear(Rise - hvis du mener stige) in the future. The Chinese people have gone through(ville overveje en omformulering her) an evolution of(from) poverty, ignorance and bad infrastructure. (til nu, at de har..... ?)
The exciting China
China is a country which growth(grows) extremely fast, the incomes for the consumers are growing immense and the middleclass are over(overvej represents istedet) 100 millions consumers on the labour market. Today demands the Chinese people western goods.(vend ordstillingen om. Today the Chinese people demands....)
That is also why many Danish companies export(Mener du ikke outsourcer?) to China; they demand the goods and the manpower are(is) very cheap. The companies may remember the country’s infrastructure, because the difference between city and village are huge – it will be very difficult to distribute the goods from village to the rest of the world. One positive thing is that China has shifted from a central plan economy to a market economy. It means that the 1,3 billion of the population in the future will increase with 7-8% in the private consumption.
Growth possibilities
The growth possibilities are great, and Dr. Wang she is a person who helps new entrepreneurs to integrate a company. She has a great influence on the economic growth, and she is known from the private sector, also from policy.
After Dr. Wang’s revolution on the labour market then have(slet then have) the country ( indsæt has) opened new possibilities for all (alle hvem?) with the export.
The culture
A company which appear(Hvorfor appear her? Bare slet og sig exports to China) exporting to China may be very careful, because there are some cultural characteristic in the human. When a Chinese says “Yes” it means they agree (with) you or they understood (understand, nutid) what you (are saying) said. It is also very important that they not will “loose there face” – then do not make it public for the persons.
When you negotiate must you (you must, omvendt ordstilling) have a lot of patience and be steady in your reactions. It is also very normal with a lot of interruptions in the solutions – they are discussing forward and backward(s) with the overhead.
If you invite a Chinese business partner for dinner then you may remember; they are eaten and refill the plate as long like you. Under the dinner it is very normal that the host gives the visitor delicious food over on the plate. As host do not put the fingers in your mouth, it is very nasty for the Chinese people.
Everything from this article is basically know how before you are starting to think exporting to China.
Verner Worms is also talking about 10 golden advices to the business man who will have behaviour on the Chinese labour market.
The advices can be seemed here:
1. Patience – things take time, especially in the start.
2. Do not rush up – it would be expected like no control.
3. Do not give up - everything is in the principle possible in a relation-based society.
4. Be flexible – keep up your own limits.
5. Be aware - learn to march to the local music.
6. Be social with the Chinese people – you are not learning much from a hotel window.
7. Build trust to your business partner – it is more important than you believe.
8. Do not offend the Chinese people – They are sensitive of criticism.
9. Have focus on the positive aspects of the Chinese people you socialize - "If you like me, I like you"
10. The Chinese people are not opaque - They are just reacting different.
Written by
Ivan Iversen
Bestseller assistant
Der var lige et par stykker...
Jeg ville nok få en eller anden med rimelige engelskkundskaber til at kigge det igennem. Med al respekt, så er det ikke særligt godt. Det bærer meget præg af een, der tænker på dansk og som derefter oversætter det direkte til engelsk. I folkemunde 'danglish'.
Eks. Countless of opportunities in China -> Countless opportunities in China
Eks. This country is a very big economic power, and it will just appear in the future -> appear bruges fortrinsvist om fysiske tilstedeværelse. Så her siger sætningen, at Kina vil komme ud af den blå luft i fremtiden.
Hilsen oversætteren.
Hehe, 5 fejl? ;)
@Proletaren
Det er fint, hvis de blot ikke er nævnt endnu :)
@Skizomick
Yes det har du helt ret i, og er helt enig.. - er selv klar over dette.
ok som engelsk lærer gør det nærmest ondt i mine øjne at læse det..
Danglish som der bliver nævnt er bedre kendt som danisme, hvor man glemmer at engelsk og dansk har modsatrettet ordstilling, og den type fejl er der mere end 10 af alene.
Udover det er der mange 3. persons s'er (flertals fejl) Og generelle fejl i sætningsopbygningen.
Husk at ord som everybody, everyone etc skal betragtes som ental = everyone is og ikke are..
vil ikke rette din opgave, men nu ved du hvilke fejltyper der er de mest gennemgående hvilket burde være en stor hjælp til at skrive det om
david
@drunkendane
Som dansklærer gør det fysisk ondt på mig, når folk der skriver, de er lærere, ikke kan finde ud af at skrive "engelsklærer" i eet ord, men skriver det i to ord:-)
@drunkendane
Yes er klar over mine formuleringer ligger til i den forkerte ende ;)
Men tak for dine indvendinger, kigger på det når jeg får min gode stil igen..
Det ville være lettere med en original tekst på Dansk. De to tekststykker er én stor fejl, og flere sætninger er svære at rette fordi de ikke giver meget mening
@TomNash,
Den sætning lader vi vist bare stå et øjeblik :]
@TomNash
Nu kan han jo være en engelsk lærer :o)
Men indrømmet - hans nick indikerer mere at han er en fuld dansker ;o)
@op
Af ren nysgerrighed, hvilket niveau er det på? (gymnasie A-C, uni, osv).
sig hunden spiste dine opgaver istedet for at aflevere det der ! hvis det er bare en smule vigtigt så få hjælp til at skrive hele lortet om.
@ski
det er på A-niveau.. gør kun det hele bedre ;)
@Live
Fuck nej, ingen god idé - afleveringer skal jo laves :p hvilket jeg har gjort!
hvis vi tager indledningen
The opportunities of exporting to China are all possible for companies which expect to realize profit. This country is a very big economic power, and it will just appear in the future.
mulighederne for at eksportere til kina er alle mulige for firmaer som forvent at realisere profit. Dette land er en meget stor økonomisk magt, og det vil lige fremstå i fremtiden.
det er ca sådan her det du har skrevet bliver læst og det er hele vejen igennem.
skriv det du vil på dansk og brug google translate imo.
"they are eaten and refill the plate as long like you"
Der er lidt "Love you long time" over det ;)
They will keep eating, and refill their plates as long as you do so. (eller as long as you keep doing it / as long as you keep eating)
Men altså ... næsten alle sætninger er "Engelsk på Dansk" - eller Danglish.
@Live
Ønsker ikke at bruge google translate, så lærer man jo ingenting! ;) haha
@Zaphod
Yiir er sgu en fin abe til engelsk :p